I wish you knew my love for you!


So, here I go again. All the feed backs are welcomed open-heartily.Β In fact, DO provide your feedback on how can I improve my writing. πŸ™‚

There passed a sleepless night
Both of them took a deep, restless sigh,

She knew she loved
But the other one felt unloved, 😦

She had to go far away in other city
Other one thought it was her way of escaping her present misty,

“Hey, I’ll miss you” she said hesitantly
Mere “You too” was the response she got crustily, πŸ˜•

“How will I manage alone in new place without you” she added
“Don’t say this now when you are going, leaving me behind when needed” ,

She felt how her deep love is still not comprehended
HerΒ unsaid words created an impact which if said could get it reverted, πŸ˜₯

She turned her back so that her tears couldn’t be noticed
But little did she know she’s too small to hide an emotion as strong as being twinged,

“Goodbye Mom” she said and turned to board the train
Listening to which mom hugged her daughter and words remain,

“My child, I know you love me
But this is a mother’s heart, brittle is the site of splitting WE.” πŸ™‚ 😦

A MOTHER UNDERSTANDS WHAT A CHILD DOESN’T SAY.
Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β – Jewish Proverb

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22 Comments Add yours

  1. Idle Muser says:

    Reblogged this on IDLE MUSER (aka Aditi) and commented:

    When you revisit your own old writings, you realize how far have you come. And another realization that hits you is the fact that the emotions with which you had written it way back are still intact, their warmth still tingles you mildly.
    I hardly write poems; but I had tried writing some in the start. Here is one of them. Still close to my heart. Still as fresh as it was back then.

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  2. Prabhu says:

    This is really really great. Liked it.

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you Prabhu!😊☺

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  3. kortkor2 says:

    Beautiful! And love the Jewish Proverb at the end. I love my mama, so I appreciate the post!

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you so much!😍😊

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  4. 187puneet says:

    That was lovely. I am nominating you for 2 awards at the same time as I have went over your blog and there’s vebrtsility and sunshine. πŸ™‚

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      I am honored to receive these awards. πŸ˜€
      Thank you so much! πŸ™‚

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      1. Puneet says:

        I am tired saying Welcome now. LolπŸ˜‚

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        1. Idle Muser says:

          You probably should be. πŸ˜€
          Sorry got time today only to reply to recent comments. :p

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          1. Puneet says:

            No problem. πŸ˜€ Interacting with people is good.

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      You are amazing!😍😘😘

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      1. Apeksha Rai says:

        I know right!!!! ❀

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        1. Idle Muser says:

          πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‡

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  5. Creativitopia says:

    I did’nt realise you already received a blogger recognition award but i nominated you πŸ™‚

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      No problem.
      It’s my pleasure to receive it again. πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Monica Krishnamurthy says:

    Awsum Aditi πŸ™‚ Keep up the gud wrk and keep writing my dear πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you so much Monica! πŸ˜€ πŸ™‚

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  7. Aditi, let me tell you one thing you are already a great writer. You are going really well with the kind of posts you’re writing.

    I love this one too. A beautiful relation. πŸ˜ƒ

    I wish you all the very best. :)))

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you soo much Sumit! πŸ™‚
      You have been really a very good support. πŸ˜€ πŸ™‚

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  8. RM Saravanan says:

    Wonderful Aditi

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you Sir!πŸ˜ƒβ˜Ί

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