India-A filthy Nation!

All in black mood, he rushed out towards the road from the dingy apartment where he lives with his wife. The road so crowded but none of his people to be seen.

While walking on those pavements, strolling through those parks, eating roadside vada-pav, he only had one thought in his mind-London. No, it didn’t just spring up from somewhere and took seed in his mind, but it was his home.

“Will you please stop fretting over everything!” His wife implored over phone. “It’s not that you are in India for the first time. This was your home for thirty years.” She added.

He was in no mood to discuss cum argue over anything right now; let alone this India-is-your-country thing. He disconnected the call with her words still in mid-way. This loss of connection, he could easily blame upon the network towers here in India, just the way every other tower, building, and multiplex around here had been at the receiving end of his blames. After all it’s not London!

“Can you please get aside?” A lady had to push him aside to find her way while walking behind him.
He was so much into his past that it made the present tough for the people around him. After all nobody likes to get stuck behind a medium-build tall man, who has either an extremely weird clothing sense or whose wife probably forgot to wash his white shirt which he would have worn over those black pants instead of bright red colored t-shirt that he was wearing now.
If it were some young, charming man girls wouldn’t have minded his blocking their ways. But unfortunately here we had not-so-young Jayant.

He looked around for a bench, a clean one. But damn it! It’s India. Not London.

Around were few children, suffering from malnutrition, playing football with a plastic bottle. His face drooped as if he was a sunflower and those children were just symbolizing darkness. If only it were London, there would be real football instead of a stupid bottle!

After futile efforts of finding a desirable bench to sit, he gave up to a rusty bench in the extreme corner of the park. Something is better than nothing, he thought.

He rummaged in his bag to find it; he explored every pocket of his backpack but it all went in vain. London, in past seven years, had made him chronic to have a chewing gum in his mouth (almost) all the time. He embarked on a quest to find a shop. Thank God, he said under his breath; this probably was his first time in India since his comeback that he was thanking God instead of whining. I don’t have to walk over another dusty road to find the shop, a thought similar to many that had crossed his mind in past two weeks.

“Please give me that packet of chewing gum.” Jayant asked pointing towards a box kept near the left arm of the shopkeeper.

Oh! The accent. “You not from India?” Shopkeeper asked out of curiosity.

Jayant, who would be the last person to get involved in such kind of conversation, tried to smile really hard to not to look rude. “I am.” I was. “No, I am not.” What is it with his English? Anyhow.

“Oh! India nice place. You like it.”

Why is he not giving me that damn packet? These people, I tell you, are testing my patience. “How much for one packet?”

“20 rupees.”

Jayant gave him the money, took the packet and without making any eye contact to avoid any further unwelcome conversation with the shopkeeper rushed towards his rusty bench of the park. But to his luck, the bench was already taken by someone else.

He popped in a chewing gum in his mouth and started towards his home, or an old yellow building, which he preferred to call it.

On reaching the mid-way, still lost in the thoughts of London, he stepped on something gummy. “Aagh! If only I were in London, nothing of this sort would have happened. A filthy country this is.” He cursed.

While on his way back to the building he threw the wrappers of biscuits dumped in his bag, and also spit the chewing gum on the side pavement to pop in a new gum.

“Dirty country. Huh!” He said while entering into the building.



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17 Comments Add yours

  1. …and he’s not the cleanest citizen the country has to boast about. I enjoyed reading this story. I could picture it in my mind.

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you, Jacqueline!☺️
      Yes, he definitely isn’t. There’re so many like him and unlike him too. I hope anybody who read this story did relate to it, at some level or the other.


  2. prashantt says:

    WoW!! I just love this art of storytelling and you’re amazing on it.
    A well written short & crisp story highlighting the hypocritic attitude of mindsets that i found many a times in my surroundings too.The best part of the story is the way you ended with a healthy message on readers mind.
    First we have to respect & accept our nation & motherland than to criticize it as we the people are only responsible for its progress & fall.The day we initiate honestly towards the sets of rules followed by other countries or we tend to follow in other countries while we are staying in abroad (be it cleanliness or traffic etc) we’ll have most beautiful place here only.
    It is better to clean ourselves first before cleaning other things.

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      A big thanks, Prashantt, once again.😊
      Even your comment ended with a beautiful note. Before we point our fingers out on others, we must be sure that we have been doing our part with as much efficiency and honesty as required.

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      1. prashantt says:

        You’re welcome and keep writing!

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  3. Neha says:

    So well described it all aditi 👍🏻👍🏻
    “Well, yes its INDIA , n the ppl needs to come up with the change prespective not just end up grumbling ” 😊✌🏻
    🇮🇳 Jai hind🇮🇳

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you Neha!☺️
      Well said! A nation is nothing but a reflection of its citizens.
      Jai Hind!🇮🇳😊


  4. sudershana says:

    It’s not the country but its HE is filthy even if it is London he shouldn’t have spit. And the people like him only can play the blame game. No offense but its clearly a matter of an individual priority then whether its India or USA or London. But for me one should respect his motherland, his country

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      So true, girl!
      A country is what we make it. If we look high at others’ countries, we need to treat ours the same way others treat their own.
      Instead of belittling, all we need to do is improvise our behaviour and responsibilities towards our country or city or town or maybe even our home.


  5. shewrites170 says:

    Great post
    I like the way you didn’t say if it were London, he won’t have been spitting and littering around like that

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you!☺️
      Yes. It was meant to come naturally to readers.😊

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  6. A beautiful narrative Aditi. No wonder India still has a long way to go before reaching the level of cleanliness of it’s western counterparts.
    I too have seen educated people travelling in big fancy cars throwing wrappers out of the window. Its sad!

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you, Radhika!☺️
      It’s just cleanliness that I have highlighted in my story but there are many other improvements too that we need to work on. But also, the NRIs, who stayed in India for a considerable amount of time before moving out to a foreign land; when they speak ill and try to belittle India after coming back, it makes me realize ‘Hypocrisy is human’s second nature.’


  7. He’s sort on patience and manners and full of frustration! Why blame his homeland?

    Nice job!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you, Nesie!☺️


  8. Neal says:

    Blame Indians not the country 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Idle Muser says:

      The crux of the story.☺️

      Liked by 1 person

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