Our 5 elements, unlike-Earth,Air,Water,Ether,Fire!


While walking down the street, they encountered each other. All with sullen faces and depressed spirits thought of discussing their issues, with a hope of getting rid of their miseries.

“My parents were really proud of me the moment doctors put me in a cradle.
Both of them had really high hopes from me. Even I didn’t let them down. But lately, they have changed their perspective of looking at me, and altered the reason of my existence from encouraging them to daunting them”, said he, in PURPLE dress, sobbing.

“History knows if you, in purple dress, had sustained your berth, I might have never come into existence.
It’s you who woke me up from my slumber and made me come here. I hate my augmented popularity”, expressed he dismally, in MAROON dress.

This made purple dressed him doubt his existence, with stronger reasons now.

“Did I tell you that I was in abundance with them.
But time, it belittled my existence from being in abundance to a scintilla” flinched he, in WHITE dress.

“We came here to protect them. But never did we realize that we will become a tool of murder of their own.
We wanted to make them feel safe, but time played its role and turned us from their savior to their killer”, frowned they, wearing RED dresses.

“My history precedes any of your existence. I came as a companion, with the very first of them.
I had a very good rapport with each of those humans, until you all deviated from your course. Now my existence has reached to the verge of extinction” quailed he, in his GREEN dress.

COMPETITION, in purple lost his confidence in himself.
SELFISHNESS, in maroon wanted to doze off, but couldn’t cause of its towering demand.
TRUST, in white started to fade.
WEAPONS, in red blamed changing time to turn them into a murderer.
HUMANITY, the oldest of all, in green started its reverse count-down, as it knew that it could perish off this HUMANKIND soon.

These elements’ encounter didn’t help them to regain their confidence back. But those humans, who over-heard their conversation might ponder over their issues and help these elements resolving them.

P.S. – There are so many other elements which could have been added in the list. But their addition would have outstretched the length of the post.
If you feel like adding anything, you are free to append it. 🙂

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12 Comments Add yours

  1. Prabhjot says:

    U are such a amazing writer aditi

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thanks Prabhjot!😊

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  2. maureenrose7 says:

    I could think of nothing that need be added! You did a wonderful job of it! 🙂

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you.😊😊

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      1. maureenrose7 says:

        Welcome! 🙂

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  3. Amit kumar says:

    lovely post…grt work…

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  4. The Insider says:

    Did u really follow the first hindi blog ?
    I don’t get notification 😌

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Sorry.
      I hope you got one, soon after this comment.😀

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      1. The Insider says:

        Hehe yes 💐😊👍

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    1. Idle Muser says:

      Thank you Sudhir.😃😊

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