My first attempt to write such kind. Through your comments let me know how was it. π
She was hurt π¦
But didn’t want him to know,
For she knew
This would do little good and lot of harm to their relationship..
She got bruised π
But was too afraid to ask for band-aid,
For she knew
It would make her appear weak to strong him..
She cried all night π₯
But didn’t tell him,
For she knew
It’s her smile, be it fake that makes him happy..
She fought for him in front of everyone π
But she apologized to him for her conduct,
For she knew
What he saw was her fighting, not why she was fighting..
She knew she set for less π¦
But tried to hide it,
For she knew
She couldn’t afford to love this deep again.. π₯
PS – This way she wasted her one and only life on someone who didn’t deserve it. Please don’t do this to yourself.
Be with someone who can see the strong you behind your bruises and tears!
Someone who doesn’t judge you for falling weak.Β
We just get one life. Live it for yourself first and then make others a part of it.
I am a hard-core LOVE BELIEVER! π β€ π (Just in case you think I don’t believe in love; therefore was biased. Well, that isn’t the case. π )
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The one who loves you will be able to see your sadness behind that fake smile, would be able to read your thoughts without you even uttering a word. Well written sad post. βΊοΈ
Your posts have forced me to follow your blog.
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That should be the case Puneet. But that doesn’t happen always, so we should be ready to face disappointments once in a while.
Though thank you so much for following me. π
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Yes, always should be ready to face disappointment. Welcome π
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C’mon!!! You doubt your skills, really? You first attempt is amazing π π
When you commented on my blog I was too curious to read your poem! And it’s great that I got time today π
Lovely expression β€
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Hehe so sweet of you Apeksha!ππ
Thank you so much!ππ
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Touching poetry! Nicely written, cheers π
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Thank you so much! π π
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Nice work
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Thanks Swapnil! π
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Nice thoughts, put together brilliantly well. Aditi. π
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Thank you Asha! π
Glad first attempt didn’t go that bad! π π
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All the best! π
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Thanks once again! π
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I love the imagery of two contrasting characters you portrayed. Last stanza says it all. Well written
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Thank you so much Amitav! π π
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Good one Aditi
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Thank you sir!ππ
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